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Sunday, April 27, 2008

3 Web Design Mistakes to Avoid

In our new Boxcar Marketing website it was important for James and me to implement as many best practices as possible. We wanted to start with a solid design based on usability. Here are 3 mistakes we often point out to clients and how we avoided them in our design.

Design Mistake #1: The About Us page is an About Me page.
Why is About Me a mistake for a business About page? Although we are pretty pleased with ourselves, the primary purpose of our About page is to establish what we can do for YOU. Too often About pages are nice corporate histories but are not valuable in terms of closing a sale, building trust and establishing credentials that are relevant to potential clients.
Look at our About page for ideas on how you can move beyond About Me and towards About You.

Design Mistake #2: No Author Photo or Company Photo
For companies like ours, where the primary contact is James Sherrett or Monique Trottier, the photo is important. In general, photos of staff or key employees are important for two reasons: photos offer a more personable impression of the company and photos connect the virtual and physical world. For example, people who meet me at a QuickLearn session or see me on a Lab with Leo episode will immediately recognize that they have come to the right website. And in reverse, people who read the Boxcar Marketing blog are more likely to recognize me when we meet in person at a conference or for a meeting.

Design Mistake #3: More-on Links
I posted in September a marketing tip on link text: “Don’t Be a More-On”. In short, more-on refers to hyperlinks that say things like, “Read more” or “Click here.” James and I think these types of links are pretty useless and we aim to write hyperlink text that is persuasive or at minimum tells the visitor where they are going. We are not 100 percent perfect in our link text, but you can see 2 examples in this post. The link directing you to our About page is an example of a persuasive link. It identifies the benefit: Look at our site and borrow ideas for improving your own. If our site was sales focussed, I would enhance that text further by saying something like, See how Boxcar Marketing doubled sales by improving their About copy. Much more persuasive than “Click Here”, right?

The above hyperlink text, a marketing tip on link text: “Don’t Be a More-On”, is the second example. The text gives you an indication of where you will go if you click on that link. On the web, life is too short to click on uncertain links.

What do you think? Do you use your About page differently? Do you have photos? What text do you use for the majority of your links? Share your thoughts.

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Kiley | 04/28  at  10:27 AM

Hi Monique,

Great Underwire this month ...

I’ve been thinking about your About Us comment--about it needing to be about client benefits as opposed to “me, me, me.” To a certain extent, I agree. That is, I think people should stay away from self-absorption a la “Aren’t we great?”, “Oh my god, we’re so great!”, “Have we mentioned we’re great?” sort of thing. I do think an About Page should do its part--actually a major part--in convincing a prospect they want to work with the company behind the website. But I also think about my own company-exploring on the web--where About is one of my favourite pages to check out--and I realize there’s a huge curiosity factor going on where I really want to know about them (the people behind the website). I want to know who they are, and how (in terms of tone) they explain who they are because I want to know if I like them. If we’re sympatico. If I think they’re cool. Again, this is not to contradict your point--if they blab on boringly about themselves, I won’t like them. But neither will I be very interested in an overly obvious client benefits pitch--I won’t be satisfied. I want a little idiosyncrasy--a little “I know the rules, and I’ll break them a little.” It’s a fine balance, I think.


Monique Trottier | 04/28  at  03:25 PM
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Hey Kiley,
Thanks for the feedback.

I agree with you. The About page can’t be a straight benefits pitch either. It needs to find the balance.

For example, this would be a Me focussed paragraph:

With a long history of internet marketing expertise, Boxcar Marketing (ME) helps create online promotions that enhance traditional sales and marketing. We apply (ME) our expertise (ME), development and strategies to ensure the success of all of our campaigns (ME). We help (ME) our clients (ME) achieve the competitive advantages that are possible online.

Versus, a You focussed paragraph:

The number one reason to invest your time and money (YOU) in internet marketing is to increase success in all aspects of your business (YOU). With the online marketing approach right for your industry (YOU), you can enhance your traditional sales and marketing (YOU) to achieve a competitive advantage. Let us help you (YOU).

Same type of content, different tone.


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